You told me it would hurt

You told me it would hurt

A Poem by Beatrice Mars

You told me it would hurt,

I underestimated your warnings

Now I cry

For being such a fool,
Now I cry,

I wish for you

I wish for luck

DAMN

I wish for you -

To go back

To tell yourself -

to TRY HARDER to warn me away.

DAMN, I wish for you

Still.

© 2011 Beatrice Mars


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EMF
Heartbreaking. Superb work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i read this before but never reviewed :/ just to say that i love the repetition and emphasis and just everything xxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2011
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Beatrice Mars
Beatrice Mars

United Kingdom



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I'm an 19 year old girl. Of all the souls that stand create I have elected one. When sense from spirit files away, And subterfuge is done; When that which is and that which was Apart, intr.. more..

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