Champagne Bubbles

Champagne bubble

Stars, shine

On marzipan clouds.

 

They fizzle and burst

In the last rays of a

Gummy lace sun.

 

Champagne stars

Shoot through

A treacle universe, their light

Lost inside the chewy

Hearts of gods,

Who float, waiting.

 

Champagne starts

Fizzle and burst on
My tongue as I bleed

Red wine blood.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this I wrote an alcohol poem last Sunday but yours is better

[The Nude Writer]

Very strong poetic writing :) Love it

[K.]

I love this. "fizzle and burst in the last rays of gummy lace sun" a well painted picture. great write.

[krish]

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I LIKED + LOVED = ENJOYED....

[John]

Evervescent and tactile. A real word treat.

[zainul]

Observed Champagne with keen eyes and thoughtful heart!
Wonderful write.

[Cliff Rhodes]

Interesting thoughts, and you put them together very nicely.

[helix88]

love this

[Cassidy Mask]

ahh another alcohol poem ;) lush though.

'Lost inside the chewy
Hearts of gods,
Who float, waiting. '

love this.