So Totally Romantic

So Totally Romantic

A Poem by Beatrice Mars

I'd tell you that

I love you,

But I don't need to.

 

I'd declare my

Luv

In 140 characters,

But (I hate you)

You're not so insecure.

 

You don't need me to tell you what we are.

 

But, I'm going to (jump on the bandwagon)

Try and be romantic.

(In type)

 

Just so you know,

I love you, you keep me safe,

You keep me sane.

 

And if you really want,

I'd keep you up all night,

And we'd be so

Totally deep, we'd sink our little hearts.

© 2010 Beatrice Mars


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This made me LOL.

'I'd keep you up all night,
And we'd be so
Totally deep, we'd sink our little hearts.'

You're very clever with words and such.

I'd tell you that
You're brilliant,
But i don't need to. :D xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Beatrice Mars
Beatrice Mars

United Kingdom



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I'm an 19 year old girl. Of all the souls that stand create I have elected one. When sense from spirit files away, And subterfuge is done; When that which is and that which was Apart, intr.. more..

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