Wet And Windy Day

Wet And Windy Day

A Poem by Beatrice Mars

It was a wet and windy

Day when I decided

To get away.

 

I got on a train,

Left everything.

 

It was just a

Plain way of saying,

"I'm not really happy"

 

I cut my hair and

Tattooed my arms,

 

Changed who I was

So I could get on a train,

That wet and windy day,

Just to get away.

© 2010 Beatrice Mars


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Wow, this is very very good! To the naked eye, one would believe it to be so very different and then you read into it and get all the depth of it and just... wow. This is fantastic, I love how you contrast the mood of this with the colours! Very nice indeed mortal~

Posted 13 Years Ago


I want to do this too. especially the cutting my hair bit. and i love trains. and wetness. and wind. and i want to get a tattoo...... anyway i LOVE this and the colours and how they're so contrasting with the overall mood (that i got anyway). and yeah..... (crap review) ..I LOVE THIS.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Beatrice Mars
Beatrice Mars

United Kingdom



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I'm an 19 year old girl. Of all the souls that stand create I have elected one. When sense from spirit files away, And subterfuge is done; When that which is and that which was Apart, intr.. more..

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