Just Jealous

You're a slag,

Or I'm just jealous.

 

I watch you,

Wondering why (if)

I don't like you.

I watch you give

Him your pretty smile.

And I wonder if you're a slag,

Or if I'm just jealous.

 

I listen to you laugh

And flirt.

(You're a slag)

 

I watch you set yourself

Up to fall,

And I know

You are

Just. a. slag.

 

I listen to you cry,
And I know

I'm jealous.

Reviews

[Cassidy Mask]

Love the confusion and insecurity of this :L we've all thought / felt like this really haven't we...? love it.

[EMP]

this is really good (why didn't i read this earlier?) :L
i'm intrigued as to what the story is behind it.
but it's gooooood. i like the ending especially, it's like you start reading this thinking 'yeah yeah she's a slag' and then you're like awww :( bless you.
that was like the crappest review i've ever given. but i love this poem

[.]

wow ...thats a deep look at how people are viewed, how jealousy can mar our preception of people..this is cleverly constructed, the ending is a thought provoker..

[ClosingAccount]

Sweet! Get your swagg on!