Blood.Bruised.Dead.

Blood.Bruised.Dead.

A Poem by Beatrice Mars
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Blood Bruised Dead

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Your love hearts were always more

Red

Than pink, before

Long they were

Getting on for

Blue.

And by the end they were

Black

© 2010 Beatrice Mars


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Love the theme and symbolism. The format seems strange but at the same time it makes sense when you really read into the meaning.

Posted 14 Years Ago


:0 < my face
This was so simple and so painful and beautiful and just short and just so... 'this is how it is'... dunno a word for that.

^And that is so pretentious -_-
:D xxxxxxxxx

Posted 14 Years Ago


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this is reeeally good. I love how it's so short because it just kinda emphasizes the words and makes them more blunt? if that makes any sense at all? this is just very very good (:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Beatrice Mars
Beatrice Mars

United Kingdom



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I'm an 19 year old girl. Of all the souls that stand create I have elected one. When sense from spirit files away, And subterfuge is done; When that which is and that which was Apart, intr.. more..

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