Control

I don't often feel in control

And I often feel like giving up.

 

But right now it doesn't matter

If I am fates plaything

And it

Doesn't matter if I don't have free will

Because I believe I do.

 

I've got a lot to do,

But,
Whatever control there is

I have it 

 

I'd rather blame
God's plan

(Or Lucifer's interference)

But I can't blame something

I can't believe in,

(Or Comprehend)

 

So I'm just going to get on with it,
Whatever control there is

I have it.

Reviews

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I have to say.. this one is so interesting and well done.. really cool thoughts here..you do have it..

[EMP]

ooh i like this very much... there's something about the structure that makes it feel controlled... love the bit claire put in her review.. awesome.

[Cassidy Mask]

This is great. And true and logical..

'So I'm just going to get on with it,
Whatever control there is
I have it.'

brilliance. xx