Empyrean

Empyrean

A Story by Beatrice Mars

I had a million

Good quotes lined up

In my head

So as to 'document'

The sunny days.

But all I can remember are

The smiles and the sun.

(And breadsticks and

Birds on your head)

 

These are the things I live for;

Sunny days

Snowy day

And anything in between

That means being

With people who make me

Smile,

Singing along to

Good songs

And bad songs

And anything in between

That makes me laugh.

 

These are the

People I live for

And the people

I'd die for,

My friends who

Make me laugh

And make cry

And everything in between.

 

With you I'm in the

Highest heaven;

Empyrean is the place

With you,

The place I am.

© 2010 Beatrice Mars


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I was going to write about empyrean... and then i realised i had nothing to say.. i'm finding that a lot recently... ANYWAY loved this. Really.

'(And breadsticks and
Birds on your head)'

:D Good times xxxxxxxxxx

Posted 14 Years Ago


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word of the day ;)

i loooove this bethan, it's calm, it flows well, it has a great rhythm and some really good imagery in it, i especially loved the last stanza "empyrean is the place with you, the place I am"

lovelovelove

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Beatrice Mars
Beatrice Mars

United Kingdom



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I'm an 19 year old girl. Of all the souls that stand create I have elected one. When sense from spirit files away, And subterfuge is done; When that which is and that which was Apart, intr.. more..

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