Chocolate

Love is like sweet stuff

Eating chocolate,

I've come to realise,

Is somewhat like

Our 'relationship'.

 

Savouring nibbles,

Tentative flirting,

Smiling at you from

Across the class room.

 

A whole chunk,

You asked me out,

Another,

Our first date.

(You brought me chocolates!)

 

Stuffing bar after bar,

Our first time,

Gorging myself on you.

 

Rinsing my mouth out, because

I feel sick,

Rebound dating.

 

Going back for more,

You're addictive.

 

Those last few chunks,

Just in case.

 

 

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Great analogy. For a chocolate lover like myself, I can readily feel the intensity of your piece. It seems almost childish to compare love with such addiction but for someone like me who understands the seriousness of such cravings, I really can relate with this poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Cassidy Mask]

VVVVVVV AGREE VVVVVVV (*adds to favourites*)

[EMP]

i really liked this. it was really good, the imagery was fab,

Savouring nibbles
Tentative flirting

fantabulous Miss Mars!