Repetition Rocks. (And I can spell it now!)

Forward.

 

This is just crazy rambling

And It's stressing me out.

(Because I do stress, just not infront of you.)

I've got to say,  It was simpler

Before,

But now it's just a

Crazy mess, So I'm -

Oi, Get on with it!

Hey! This is the

Forward!

Well, you're taking to long!

I just wanted to

Explain.

Well Don't

Get on with it!

Ok! Well I was going to tell

You how

The wind swept

Through the tree's like

An angry-

Get on with it!

Ok OK, here goes....

 

The Real Thing.

 

Repetition Rocks! -

Ohmygod - That's alliteration -

This is amazing!

You better start writing

This down...(TONE OF FOREBODING)

It's just a conversation!

 

 

Eww

Ewww

Ewwww!

Ohmygod! Repetition!

 

(Brackets) WOW. WOW

(Or maybe that's sarcastic...)

I'm not in this

Very much

I'm not in this

Very much

She's not in this

Very much.

MORE repition!

You spelt it wrong.

Stupid.

 

I failed my life!!!

....

.....

Yep, you did!

Oh dear

LOVE IS HELL.

(It is)

Oh dear,

What can the matter be?

How to drive a

Deserving teacher

Crazy.

Let's do it,

Let's do it!

(REPETITION)

Hmmmm

Hmmmmm

Hmmmmmm

                                   (Hallucinating?)

Oh dear

I'm a

Goofy

Child!!

(Hey, Wait a minute,

I didn't say that!)

Well.....

OoH ErrR!

(Rocky bottom...)

Dignified social

Intercourse eh?

...What ever...

WEAR RUBBER!

NOOOOO!

OH MY GOD

WE'RE ALL GOING TO DIE.

Oh dear, Oh dear Oh dear....

 

Acknowledgements.

 

....I beg your pardon....

 

MERRY CHRISTMAS         MERRY CHRISTMAS                           MERRY CHRISTMAS!

 

(repetition!)

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

......Crazy mess! Contributed to heavily By Cassidy Mask and Bea's Peas!

Reviews

[absolutefolie]

This is acually amazing.

[Cassidy Mask]

Love this like Luca loves mr A.

Dignified social intercourse

[Gabriella]

Haha I love this poem, it's so perfectly chaotic. It makes me like I'm a mess when I'm reading it and really puts me in the place of the speaker. Also, I love how you managed to be so erratic and messy without swearing at all. It makes it seem kind of family friendly until you look at the content. Excellent work, thanks for sharing!

[Hello, Goodbye]

I think I just entered into an artistic coma.

[Katrina Mckeown]

lmao....This is great! More plz More!......More Plz More...wooops i did already say that!, ooh well who gives a flying f**k and yes i did read the other one! :-)

[EMP]

hehehe this doesn't half make me smile :D when i find out how to put poems in favourites, this is going too :P i love it to bits :D

ooh errr (rocky bottom) ahhhh the joys of english :')