Loved you

There's nothing worse

Than,

I don't love you anymore.

 

 

(I never loved you.)

 

Are we even then?

 

You (we) don't know

What love is.

 

  (This you are is going to be another heartbreaker.)

 

I hate you.

 

(I always hated you.)

 

But we'll get over

that. (Each other.)

 

'Cause this aint

Perfect,

But,

It's better than nothing.

 

 

Who wants to be alone?

 

(We're still lonely.)

 

So we'll laugh

And joke

And do our best

To get over              (Each other)

This

(World.)

 

 

We're the first

Of our

Kind

(Well not really.)

Nothing to go on,

Making (it) up as we go along.

 

(Although,

I never

Loved you

Not sure

Why I'm we're

Still here.)

 

Arguing again,

(Daily domestics.)

But when you

Slam

The door,

I get

Shivers

Down my

Spine.

 

I want (to

Follow) You,

But,

I don't want to lose

(My)

Face.

(That shouldn't

Matter.

Not if this is real

                                                           (But this is just for kicks.)

 

 

                     (I'm still waiting for the day you

                                Fall

                                     In love.)

             

Never loved you,

Always Hated you.

(Other way around?)

 

I'm trying

To be

Angry

At your

Infidelity.

(But what did you

Cheat on?)

                                                           (This is just for kicks.)

 

 

 

Never loved you.

 

                               (Promise.)

 

(We don't need promises.)

                                                         

 

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

I nearly cried.... this is such a heartfelt painful display of torment. The tentive want not to love someone you did at one point do everything for.
the format filled with some sorta empythay bouncing thru thoughts

[EMP]

i like it, i love it, i adore it! (adore's too pretty a word for this poem)
(Although,
I never
Loved you
Not sure
Why I'm we're
Still here.)
love it :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

This poem stirs a very deep emotion and leaves you with a heavy feeling .
Heart break and break ups; books are filled with such poems, this one should be added.
Cherrie

[Cassidy Mask]

(That shouldn't
Matter.
Not if this is real
(But this is just for kicks.)

love this soooooo much :D