Iridescent Dellerium

Iridescent Dellerium

A Poem by Beatrice Mars
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So what are we to do about this evil? (who wants to be a millionaire?)

"

 

So what are we to do about this evil?

We fight this war because we want to

not so that we can destroy our enemies

(who is really evil if we all want this war)

is it bad that I enjoy killing those who seek to destroy me?

does that make me worse than my enemies?

the greater of two evils

who is to decide?

I’m not sure

Do you have a(n exemplary) candidate, one who is qualified?

 

Military Tattoo

            Taboo

Edinburgh

Come sort me out

give me a good beating

you know you want to

(besides I deserve it)

Cat on the piano

Scratch my eyes out

 

The legacy is nothing

it's not real

I wanted it to be real (f**k the legacy)

when will she be back ?

(nobody knows)

let's keep it that way

 

What ever happened to 2400 hours?

it is a 24 hour clock is it not?

I’ve been up all night.

 

Can you see yourself

Do you know you're all grey and gohsty

Did you die?

I don't remember you dieing

I think you are

I think this is a dream

I hope so

 

Abdicate

Chop off my head

Which would you prefer?

cat in the piano

Makes no nice noise

Slits in your wrists

Respect?

 

That don't sound like much of a compliment

Don't Rate me

        Hate me

        Slate me

Just don't judge me

 

      Delirium (cancer of the mind)

      Stretch out to the final existence

      the only extreme

(is)  iridescent

      Regardless

      I know what I was meant to write

      this is not it. (not me)

 

© 2008 Beatrice Mars


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Very interesting poem. I love the way you laid it out and the display. Great poem. I like the line "do you know you're all grey and ghostly?" As if this phantom was unaware of its death. Haunting.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome (as always)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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wow, great write! this poem had an intensity to it, i really enjoyed reading it, good job,

keep writing!
-Ashley A

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Beatrice Mars
Beatrice Mars

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I'm an 19 year old girl. Of all the souls that stand create I have elected one. When sense from spirit files away, And subterfuge is done; When that which is and that which was Apart, intr.. more..

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