Red Red Roses

Make me forget to breath - 

(Red red roses and

Bright fire diamonds)

Feint and fluttery,

See if I say yes. 

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A hair clings to the 

Cold wet of your glass, 

Glittering in the red red lights, 

A hand on my hips, my back, my arse, 

Is this a good night? 

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Tear drop petals spread on our bed, 

Did you do this? 

(Red red roses, wilt and die)

A glimpse in the dark, a flash of light, 

What is this? I know not.

But I'll sing along. 

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I like the ending
Very nice indeed

[Sami Khalil]

A glimpse in the dark,
a flash of light.
Nice write.

[B-poet]

I like this poem very much. Red roses represent eligance and beauty. And singing along with this occasion is why red roses are very special. Great job. :)

[Aaron]

I love this. I'm a sucker for well written subtly sexual poems.

"But I'll sing along"
I can't say I completely understand your choice of that line but it seems to work perfectly. I liked it.

Thanks for sharing.