lesbian love affair

lesbian love affair

A Poem by Beatrice Noir

kiss between my fingers, and i`ll show you what

people are always talking about,
my hands glide over velvet lips, a garden bathed in the
soft light of night.

caught between the silence and the floor
boards, our lingering breath will lay.

the foundation will hear us for days to come,
a gentle song of low gasps escaping us.

all i ask is to catch me,
when i fall from new hights,
laying half blanketed in drops of extacy.

© 2008 Beatrice Noir


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kiss between my fingers, and i`ll show you what
people are always talking about,

Beautifully written...



Posted 16 Years Ago


I love how quiet and yet passionate this is. it's secretive and sensual and beautiful. I love "kiss between my fingers, and i`ll show you what people are always talking about" and "caught between the silence and the floor boards".

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like the light, sensitive touch here.

Leave the graphics to the others. You've captured the moment.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow... so much imagry! This is so beautiful... one of the best pieces of this nature that I've read. It has such flow... I can imagine the feelings & I actually got goose-bumps!

Amazing write. Passionate read. Very relatable. Great job!

I look forward to reading more from you.


Posted 16 Years Ago



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