Lonely by the ocean

Sitting on a bench by the ocean.

Thinking about us when we first kissed each other here by the ocean.

We talked for hours with each other here by the ocean.

Now i'm sitting here alone on the bench by the ocean.

Spending hours alone watching the ocean.

Thinking about us how we talked about life.

When you told me the bad news that you was badly sick.

When you whispers your wish into my ear.

The ocean wind is blowing through my hair.

Crying because your not here anymore.

Screaming your name over the ocean waves.

Your laying now lonely there on the ocean floor.

You and the ocean have always a place into my heart.

Reviews

[Bri]

I'm not sure if you're using a certain poetic style that I am not familiar with but, I find that repeating words might make the poem drag a bit. That's just my opinion, other than that, the story your telling is great. Very deep.