Slowly

I'm slowly drowning in my sadness.

I'm slowly get back to my addiction.

I'm slowly feel the pain who haunts me for years come back to me.

Slowly drips tears off my face.

Slowly red dots drips on my shirt.

Slowly i cut my wrist.

Slowly the love memories fade away off you..

Slowly i close my eyes and die slowly.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems!
What do you think off the text?

Reviews

[DevenGrant]

Yeah, the grammars a problem, but I like the poem. It's really depressing and to me a little cliche, but I can tell your words are passionate.

[Another Relic]

Asking readers to ignore the grammar problems is like asking them to ignore the pink splotches on the green wall in your living room. They have to stumble through it and analyze the sentences and figure out what you mean. Other than that, this is a sad poem although a common one. But I realize that you spoke with your soul which is one of the most important traits for a poet if that's what he chooses to do. I say besides the grammar issues, this is a good poem and a scary one. Keep writing.