Yesterday's child what wrongs did you see Touched in a way no child should be You suffer in silence for the whole world is cruel For whoever you told would think you the fool And year by year deeper embedded is the pain Always holding up to an unbearable strain Twist and turn so contorted the mind Not certain or fearing what you might find But from confusion reality is born And bad from good must be torn Purify the spirit and redeem the soul An act of freedom to make you whole Look inside and find your true self Then dare to share all that you might see And teach the world to be all it can be Bear
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I read your poem and I am deeply moved by the emotions that you have captured in your words. The way you describe the pain of being touched in a way no child should be touched is heart-wrenching, and your words are a reminder of the strength and resilience that it takes to overcome such trauma.
Your poem is also a call to action, a reminder that we must all be willing to face our fears and confront the pain of our past in order to move forward and build a better future. It is a reminder that we are not defined by our past, but rather by the choices we make in the present. Your words are a reminder of the power of hope, of the importance of self-love and acceptance, and of the way that we can all learn from the struggles and triumphs of others.
There is so much good within it's just the outside world consumes so much in its tirade of growing up.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
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Oh wow...This has such good vibes. Truly inspirational.
"But from confusion reality is born
And bad from good must be torn
Purify the spirit and redeem the soul
An act of freedom to make you whole"
Just love these lines. Awesome!