Your love is a blaze that consumes my soul Your support and devotion, an emotional toll Enrapture your presence when only in my mind And heavenly bliss when we're physically entwined A year round valentine, true love you are the one And without you, my life would be all but undone If lust and want, are the fuel that feeds man's greed Then passion must be the answer to all we need So love must be the question we can never undo Because I want and need for our love to be true Bear
I leave most punctuation to the reader that they can read the poem in their own meter, mood and motility. I thank you for taking the time to read my work.
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This is a lovely, romantic ode to a sweetheart.
As always, an incredible read, Bear.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you, I don't write on romance very often these days, I guess I will have to go looking for ins.. read moreThank you, I don't write on romance very often these days, I guess I will have to go looking for inspiration LOL
Great work!
The rhyme scheme is nice.
Keep writing.....
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you for reviewing my work, rhyme is my thing, in the more than five decades I have been writin.. read moreThank you for reviewing my work, rhyme is my thing, in the more than five decades I have been writing I may have written 10 poems that didn't rhyme. I shall gladly return the read and review favor soon.
Many emotions in this poem. A nice flow. Was this poem about anyone in particular?
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Not really but at my age one spends a lot of time looking back and you cant help but wonder what if,.. read moreNot really but at my age one spends a lot of time looking back and you cant help but wonder what if, maybe that will be my next poem "WHAT IF" Thank you for reviewing my poem I shall gladly return the read and review favor soon :~)
7 Years Ago
I understand, there are many lessons in life that make you think What If. Thank you for explaining. .. read moreI understand, there are many lessons in life that make you think What If. Thank you for explaining. And I would appreciate your review. Best Wishes.
Love... the drug our very cells crave, the one that lives on, beyond the grave. You capture it well, the yearning and surrender to trust in love, with hope it is not a horrible mistake. Love it.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Just need a syringe worthy of holding the golden nectar of passion and lust to inject into my wantin.. read moreJust need a syringe worthy of holding the golden nectar of passion and lust to inject into my wanting heart. Thank you for the nice review, I shall gladly return the read and review favor soon :~)