MIX MASTER STRAIGHT ARROW SPARROW

MIX MASTER STRAIGHT ARROW SPARROW

A Poem by Bear
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jesserose99 wrote a poem for this picture and I told her I would as well. Now if anyone else wants to write a poem for this picture please be sure to send a read request and share the inspiration :~)

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                Take that Rock`en Robin

I can tell you who rocks in the tree tops all day long
And it is not a robin like they sing in that old song
It's me, Mix Master Straight Arrow Sparrow the MC
I slip the lip that charms the Swallow and Chick-a-dee
And it ain't no common bird call like tweet, tweet, tweet
Once I start a chirping all the fowl are stomping their feet
The old Owl and the Big Black Crow just sway in the wind
When I spinning my rap, the whole bird world is my friend
So fear not that sound you hear off into the top of the tree
That tail feather shaking beat on Jaybird Street is only me
                                    Bear



© 2016 Bear


Author's Note

Bear
I leave most punctuation to the reader that they can read the poem in their own meter, mood and motility. I thank you for taking the time to read my work.

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This livened up my screen I ,must say! Such a refreshing and lively rap piece; made me want to be the mix master arrow sparrow!
~M.Babu~

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bear

8 Years Ago

Thank you, jesserose99 introduced me to this picture with her poem http://www.writerscafe.org/writin.. read more
Good lawd! That was a good read. I haven't read poems in a white and this one, is the best I've read!

Well done! I'm so touched right now haha.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bear

8 Years Ago

Thank you, jesserose99 introduced me to this picture with her poem http://www.writerscafe.org/writin.. read more
Haha! I love it! SOOO cute!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bear

8 Years Ago

Thank you and jesserose99 for posting her poem for this picture that inspired me, we are hoping othe.. read more
well bear, I loved this little exercise in image inspiration. the birds aren't the only ones bopping to the beat of this poem, cause I am as I read it more then once. I had to read it out loud you see, I liked the sounds it formed together. Like perfect little pieces fit in a jigsaw puzzle. Using all the names of the birds was so clever. Fowl, well, I never would of pulled that one out...not that you pulled that one out of anywhere.
Anyway...it was deliciously delightful, and real skill with rhyming ability.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bear

8 Years Ago

thank you, it was a fun write and I could have used more of the songs lyrics but I came across the p.. read more

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Added on January 7, 2016
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