SANTA'S BAD LIST

That's right, I am number one on Santa's bad list
And to get there, I had to twist more than one wrist
I am well-known for kicking, biting and pulling hair
And even taking other people's property on a dare
But don't you judge me till you have heard me out
I can change your way of thinking without a doubt
365 days you play nice, all for a Christmas day payoff
While at my 365 days of naughty fun you just scoff
I hear people whisper that I will end up in jail someday
But they are wrong, it's an education showing the way
For I plan to be the best, even better than my old man
He is a repossession agent and set my education plan
                               Bear

Author's Note

I leave most punctuation to the reader that they can read the poem in their own meter, mood and motility. I thank you for taking the time to read my work.

Reviews

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

It's unbearable not to see you have talent. Your poetry shine like the sun in the sky. I also like to see that usually you have a picture to go along with the poem. It's like adding a shake to a hamburger. It just tastes better.

[Bear]

You keep talking like that and I will get the big head and it is already big and I can't afford to hire someone tp walk beside just help hold my head up :~)

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

XD that's funny

[Abhilash Hegde]

The writing style is very captivating.
I started at the first line, and finished reading it in one breath.
Couldn't stop at it, lines kept overpowering me and I'm left a bit spellbound.

Great piece of writing.
I must say.. very refreshing to read something, other than the ordinary.

these lines, worth the mention:
"I hear people whisper that I will end up in jail someday
But they are wrong, it's an education showing the way
For I plan to be the best, even better than my old man
He is a repossession agent and set my education plan"

As they say, "I born intelligent, education ruined me"
I couldn't agree more, ticked all the boxes for me.

Thanks again, Bear!

[Bear]

Thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed it, I shall gladly return the read and review favor soon :~)

[Dalton Wagoner]

I love this, Bear! You never cease to amaze me!

[Bear]

Glad you liked it, I hope you got the chance to read my other Christmas poems, they should put a smile on your face :~)

[Dalton Wagoner]

They did! :-)