I Hate You

I know this poem sounds terrible, but it's supposed to be kind of a silly poem at the same time. I hope you like it!

You're very mean
I hate your guts
You're brainless and
You're nuckin' futs
Your face is gross
I hate your voice
And when you cry
I will rejoice
You need to leave
You need to die
Have fun in Hell
I hope you fry

Reviews

[Mr.Smith]

You can really feel the emotions behind this. Very Powerful. Nice work

[Dalton Wagoner]

Thanks! XD

[Jerryyoung1z]

Whoa! quite intense lol but despite the anger and hate, it sounds and flows really well.

[Dalton Wagoner]

Haha thanks

[child of God]

Well then this has a lot of anger in it i very well understand i have wrote many poems about people who have wronged me or hurt me it is a wonderful way to let out pent up emotions thats what poetry is about its all about conniving ones emotions in a way to relive some of the burden that it puts on us

[Dalton Wagoner]

Honestly, these words just started popping in my head and I thought they sounded funny together so I put them on paper. I then dedicated it to someone who I still felt that way about.

[Stan Lee]

Ha! That is FIERCE! Woo! Well done Dalton. Great rhymes, great rhythm in the short angry statements. nuckin' futs made me laugh tbh, sorry, I realise this isn't a laughing matter but it worked really well to remind the us that you're one of us and brings the reader over to your side. I can totally imagine stamping around the house yelling this at the top of my lungs. Great, great, great! Loved it Dalton. :)

[Dalton Wagoner]

Lol thanks. It was actually meant to be a silly poem in the first place!