Gone

This day.
Totes Bae.
Way more than I can take.
Let's go.
Far 'way.
Don't care 'bout what's at stake.
I think.
I'll leave.
Just leave this hell for good.
Escape.
This life.
Oh I just wish I could.

Author's Note

This is my friend Fay's poem. He is not a native English speaker, so don't give too harsh of criticism on his work. I hope you guys like it!

Reviews

[Nailah Baniti]

OMG, i love it, I want to run away with Fay. I love poetry that channels escapism :) Very heARTf-full

[Dalton Wagoner]

Haha thanks for the review! It will be passed on to Fay!

[Hyacinth]

Loved it:) tell your friend it's beautiful, and honestly, I can't see anything wrong with it. Short and to the point.

[Dalton Wagoner]

Okay, I'll be sure to!

[Stan Lee]

I liked it :) I think we can all relate to the wishful thoughts of escape. The rhythm was brilliant and the rhyming scheme was very clever. Thanks for sharing this write. Hope we see more :)

[Dalton Wagoner]

Andronicus, I appreciate how you always bring positivity to our site :-)