Can you?

Honest feedback is appreciated!

If you died today, what would it look like?
Would Jesus be happy with the way you loved life?
Would you look back with shame at everything you did?
As all your secrets came out, everything you hid?

Can you say you tried to live for Him?
When it got tough, when the road was slim?
When the world was against you and all that you were,
when you didn't have a clue, which way to turn?

Did you still believe when your heart got broken?
Didn't feel like He helped, felt like you were chokin',
did you have enough faith or were you too late?
Could you came forward, when He called you at the gate?

Reviews

[dreaming dame]

A smooth flow, I enjoyed reading this:)
Once again thought provoking

[Poe Redd]

I am mezmorized, and struck by emotion, and in shock, for the talent is great, and the words are raw.