Broken

I love you too but I can’t right now…

True love cannot exist

Proof from these very words

Shame on me

For believing, dreaming

I’m lost and won’t ever be found

This broken heart can’t be healed

Broken, time and time again

It won’t be mended

Half of me, gone

Impossible to shake the feeling

Pain is only a pulse

If you just stop feeling it

Reviews

[Indecisive and Loving I..]

Ahh... I truly know how you feel right now, if you need someone to talk to :)
This was awesome... I guess I found it so awesome because I can relate to the situation!

[loowzerX]

I think I would have used a different format..perhaps shorter lines. but otherwise it's good

[Tate Morgan]

very nice but it lacks the symmetry of a musical cadence that makes poetry special

[Coyote Poetry]

When we are healing we need to be allow time to take the pain away. Poem is powerful. The emotion and desire to do the right things are in your words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote