Why?

why do you have to act as though nothing i say matters?

when i say i love you all you say is ok i love you too

do i mean so little to you that you have to show no emoition when we are together?

oh whats this? a peace offering? you dont know the meaning of the word peace

a ring? marry you? for what? to do your laundry, or maybe so you can tell your friends you finally bagged me like they said you wouldn't

oh you love me now? thats interesting.

of course i love you
but of course you know that that girl has her eye on you

i knew you would turn, yes this means no

but im not done you havn't felt the shame i have yet

when i am done i expect a tear, no i dont want you to cry

are you done making a fool of yourself?

of course your not

oh here comes the yelling, go ahead im used to it

what do you mean you loved me?

no you dont, you do??

well....i dont think your sober

a bet! you bet that i would marry you if you were an a*s?

you love me really?

oh i love you to

of course i'll marry you!

i love you too

why is there a girl in your car!!!

Reviews

[Enigma]

Whoa!! One of those pieces where the anger is is sprouting up and spreading to every corner. Brimming with the pain of betrayel and negligence. The last twist in the tale was sudden, unexpected and...well, very interesting to note. You patch up with the guy, you agree to marry him, and he's found drunk with another girl in his car. Had I beeb you, I'd have smacked that loser's face!! *grrrr..*
Sorry to be rude.... :(
But anyway, the poem was well penned. All the things that happen during a fight are listed and well represented....
Great Job!!!

[Wolfwind Words]

What a twister of emotions on this one! I thought that it would have a good ending with a funny twist, but instead, you realize that the guy was a complete drunk, and had that other girl in the car! Wow, what a bad situation to be in.
Great write!