Fangs

vampire story

HIs eyes gleam in the dark as he selects another victim, his third that night but the hunger wont leave him alone, his demon demands that  he finds somone to sedate it but there is no one. David can not control himself and he pulls his victim into the shadows and rips into her neck, her blood flows likes a river, leaving dark spots all over the alley and his clothes but he doesnt care if he gets caught, at this moment his body is hyper sensitive and he can feel every moments in the ground he can see every shadow even in the dark. David growls and goes off to find someone else that he can steal blood from, David would call if borrowing but he doesnt plan on giving it back.

 

David snarls as he is captured, they surround him underestimating his power, he moves so past no one see's as he pulls their head from their body, they had locked the door from the inside so no one could get in they could just watch from the window at the blood bath going on in the inside. Blood splatters the walls, snarls fill the room, screams bounce off the walls, not an ounce of the room in left white everywhere you look is red, body parts thrown everywhere, suddenly the lights go out and Davids fangs gleam in the dark and he pulls the door open cause the power that went out cut off the security locks.

 

People out side the building can hear screams but no one would do anything, the whole building was screaming blood was spalttering the windows and everyone including the cops was horrified and would not go in.

 

David smiled as he played in the blood, making blod angels and playing football with the body parts, David had never been so happy but it was all cut short as his head flew from his body

 

"Next time i decide to make a vampire i need to teach them control" Eric sighed as he put Davids body in a bag and went back home to find another victim, one hopefully that had control

Reviews

[Legion]

Cool piece. Love the bloodlust in it and it's final repercussions. When you get a chance, check out my short story "A Walk in the Sun" and/or my poem/song "The Curse From Madame Rouge".