Angel My Angel

Angel My Angel

A Poem by Octavian
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This is a poem dedicated to Madalyn;) my lovly angel, my sweetheart and dear dear friend that I love dearly.

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Angel My Angel
Spread far and thin
Across the oceans of time
Land, sea and sky
Hear my rejoicing cry
Feel my breezy air
Brush against your smooth, gently hair
See my glow through your diamond eyes
Find my beat within your heart

My brilliant young lady
So much future inside
Holding doors of destiny
Competent, exemplary, fantastic

Your mind and soul
Tranquil, with creativity and astonishment 
Hand crafted through broken tears 
Pain that was delivered through suffering

Untouchable, ungraspable, yet felt like so
You arose through the embers
Beautiful beyond comprehension
Holding fate
A savior of your own life
While I whirl around you
Your blanket of warmth
A shield, a hope, a loving family

Glamorous as you are
I watch over you
One of GODs blessed 
Angel my Angel 

© 2014 Octavian


Author's Note

Octavian
Thank you for reading:) i love reviews, have a god bless day

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this poem is absolutely beautiful :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Octavian

10 Years Ago

Haha thank you, words can change life if one just believes in themselves. Have a great day beautiful.. read more
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Beautiful and Sweet, it takes a good heart to know an angel in disguise. very nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Octavian

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Ill keep writing more poems in life, have a god bless day and stay amazing !!!
This is so sweet and beautiful. Very well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Octavian

10 Years Ago

Thx:) Im glad you liked it!!!
I absolutely love this!! You did a great job, and I feel truly honored that you wrote this for me. Thank you! xoxo :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Octavian
Octavian

Kentwood, MI



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