A Worthy Father

A Worthy Father

A Poem by Octavian
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To a man who is a great father.

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Grand and blessed

You came into my life

When it was a great big mess

Healed my wounds, fixed my problems


That of a father, companion

A convenient man

Precluded the broken hinges

Of my imperfections


Just and Tranquil

Yet you have your flaws

But only such that suit you

Neither more nor less



Solicitous about my life

I find compassion in your voice

Beautiful and right

So few can say


Without dismay

You are a good dad, despite your pain

But such keeps you human

We share a same


Relation between us

So I thank you in high praise

Great in ways, words can’t explain

A worthy father so I say…

© 2014 Octavian


Author's Note

Octavian
If you have a good father, this is how I can relate and say that there are good fathers out in this world

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Indeed We have a Loving Father above,supreme and wise in all His ways....A person who's promised to be the father of the fatherless..and an Epitome of what other fathers should strive to be....thank you...:-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Octavian

10 Years Ago

your welcome, I'm glad that you liked it haha. Man you use some pretty cool words that I've never he.. read more
Tarella

10 Years Ago

Hahaha...lol...thanks...you're pretty good with words yourself

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Octavian
Octavian

Kentwood, MI



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Hello, Im a very optomistic guy who loves to be creative on just about anyday. I love being outside and being athletic and listening to people of all kinds and helping others. I love to write, draw an.. more..

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