Seen Through Unseen Glass

Seen Through Unseen Glass

A Poem by Octavian
"

False judgment creates lies about an individual.

"

            Fogged by judgment

            Little see the truth

            Eyes of one

            Find many beautiful creations

 

            Even in shadows

            They reflect life

            Through old to young

            A past lived in present

 

            None can challenge

            The mind of blessed imagination

            Motioning with tranquility

            Astounding, fantastic, remarkable

 

            Vision is a gift

            Fantasies are hope

            A window to beauty

            Seen Through Unseen Glass

© 2014 Octavian


Author's Note

Octavian
I made this poem to help show what certain individuals see in life when they look at themselves oppose to what someone else sees in them.

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Excellent depiction of beautiful souls. I love the metaphor used. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Octavian

10 Years Ago

thank you lots! I love your awesome review, have a god bless day!!!
I like your diction....its a really nice poem...good job.."Vision is a gift" "fantasies are hope" "a window to beauty." Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Octavian

10 Years Ago

Thank you:), I got this idea from a cool picture I seen on one of my friends pages :).
Tarella

10 Years Ago

Wow,you got inspired by a picture?that is really cool...you have a good eye.
Very nicely written! I enjoyed this quite a bit.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Octavian

10 Years Ago

Thank you Elina:). I'll check out some of your writings:).

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Octavian
Octavian

Kentwood, MI



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