If I Am

This is a poem written in response to a lovely piece by Poetic Justice called "If I..." Please read this wonderful work here: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/plelitte/709685/

If I am the journey

You are the road

If I am the cypher

You are the code

If I am the actor

You are the stage

If I am the pencil

You are the page

If I am the picture

You are the frame

If I am the player

You are the game

If I am the canvas

You are the paint

If I am the sinner

You are the saint

If I'm the ambition

You are the goal

If I am the science

You are the soul

If I am the riddle

You are the clue

If I am the wish

You're the wish that came true

Author's Note

Please read Poetic Justice's poem "If I..."

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/plelitte/709685/

Reviews

[?]

This is so nice, perfectly rhymed.
Awesome compliment

[My Fair Lady]

Delightful, thoughtful and a beautiful compliment to Poetic Justice.

[Brad]

this is a nice compliment to her peice, well done to the both of you

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Enjoyed the rhyming of this.

[LA Lorena]

Very well done! a perfectly rhymed, well paced gem.

[Robin]

a perfect compliment to hers , wonderful

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful and rhythmic~the pulse of care and love beats with sweet purity~love the gentle innocent and sincere flow of the last two lines~

[.]

No please don't ..this is so much better than mine...LOL..

Brilliant..every verse is solid..loved it...we could continue this you know!! :)