Jerry the Giant
A Poem by
Baz
Jerry is a very hungry giant indeed.
when jerry the giant gets up out of bed he has two pounds of butter on ten loaves of bread four sides of bacon three dozen eggs eight free-range chickens (including the legs) a gallon of coffee to wash it all down then he puts on his hat and sets off through the town he gets to his office between nine and ten but come half eleven he's hungry again he has twelve bars of chocolate and eight bags of chips nine bags of nachos with five different dips a bucket of cola ten apples to munch which sets him up nicely 'till its time for his lunch he has two legs of lamb and a trough full of peas eight baked potatoes all covered in cheese fifty tomatoes two hundred sprouts nine heads of cabbage and seven grilled trout a vat of iced-tea and a bucket of juice (and just to be naughty, a whole chocolate mousse) at home in the evening just before bed he has nine mega-pizzas with three garlic bread a bowl of spaghetti a lamb vindaloo some bacon and cabbage a lovely beef stew a saucepan of gravy on forty meat pies then twenty two burgers and seventeen fries he licks his plate clean with a gulp and a slurp the he sits back contented and lets out a...
© 2010 Baz
Reviews
What a fun piece :) Nice work, I really enjoyed this. The rhyme and rhythm are great :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
That was sooo cute and funny!!!! I loved it. I cant imagine eating that much food. I would probably die just eating that two pounds of better on ten loaves of bread!!! You took great care with the form and rhyming of this poem, I can tell, and it certainly turned out to be the best it could be! Love it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
That was sooo cute and funny!!!! I loved it. I cant imagine eating that much food. I would probably die just eating that two pounds of better on ten loaves of bread!!! You took great care with the form and rhyming of this poem, I can tell, and it certainly turned out to be the best it could be! Love it.
I really appreciate when a poet takes such careful time to really care about the meter and the flow of the poem. You have captured this AMAZINGLY in this piece. This is the first I have read of yours, but reading other's comments, I think I will read some more because this seems to be your style! Thank you so much for sharing this fun poem! I really enjoyed it a lot. All the best.
J
Posted 13 Years Ago
I really appreciate when a poet takes such careful time to really care about the meter and the flow of the poem. You have captured this AMAZINGLY in this piece. This is the first I have read of yours, but reading other's comments, I think I will read some more because this seems to be your style! Thank you so much for sharing this fun poem! I really enjoyed it a lot. All the best.
J
Baz ..your the master of these type of poems ..but the thought of all that food just made me feel sick!!!! LOL
Posted 14 Years Ago
Baz ..your the master of these type of poems ..but the thought of all that food just made me feel sick!!!! LOL
I LOVED this poem!!!!! It made my day when I read it!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I LOVED this poem!!!!! It made my day when I read it!!!
Always a pleasure to read your humorous poems Baz. Your meter and flow are always impeccable and I am never without a smile while reading through each stanza. You must have done a lot of food research on this one. Excellent as usual. You get a 100 from me.
Just curious,
then he puts on his hat
and set off through the town
Should that be (sets off through town?)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Always a pleasure to read your humorous poems Baz. Your meter and flow are always impeccable and I am never without a smile while reading through each stanza. You must have done a lot of food research on this one. Excellent as usual. You get a 100 from me.
Just curious,
then he puts on his hat
and set off through the town
Should that be (sets off through town?)
I love it and believe my kids would too! Another great write for the kiddies, that giant was probably letting out a belch and a toot!lol
Posted 14 Years Ago
I love it and believe my kids would too! Another great write for the kiddies, that giant was probably letting out a belch and a toot!lol
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