Broken.

Broken.

A Poem by Roberta
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Thought bubble.

"
Cracked heart.
Broken mind.
Left in parts.
Left behind.

Mind contorted.
Trust in pieces.
Hope has faded.
Love ceases. 

Will disabled.
Happiness fails.
Sadness returns.
Anger prevails. 

No love again.
Fault of my own.
Hurting like hell.
Forever alone. 

© 2012 Roberta


Author's Note

Roberta
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Wow....Sad..Grreat job tho. I really enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful and sad. Rhymes so well. Would sugggest that in the last verse you add a pronoun to the line "Fault of own." Either "Fault of your own" or Fault of my own.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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