Blame the government.

Blame the government.

A Poem by Roberta
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It's your fault 
Why people die
Why people are poor
It's your fault
Why there's pain and suffering
Why there's too much war
It's your fault
Why families are torn apart
By the murders and loss
It's your fault
Why the world is dying
You just don't give a toss
It's your fault
Why our country's a mess
Why people are afraid to speak out
It's your fault
for leaving your nation in doubt
It's your fault
That we all live in a mess
It's your fault
For letting our country digress.

© 2010 Roberta


Author's Note

Roberta
Just another thought bubble.

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I like this alot. I personally don't believe that most of those things are solely the fualt of government, but there's no question they had a play in it. My only suggestion is to add a line in front of "for leaving your nation in doubt" because that would fix the rhyme scheme. that peice is just alittle choppy. Please join the Raving Ranters group and add this so I can feature it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


If this was facebook i would Like :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Roberta
Roberta

Swindon, United Kingdom



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