Its killing me

A message from a fading light.

I'm counting down the days to go

Day by day

Forever it seems, that death taunts me

Watching, waiting

He wants me to just give in, but I'll fight

I'll see you again

All the ones I love, all the ones I need

But I know

That my time to go is nearing

I don't have long

I can't bring myself to fight any more

It kills me inside

Just like this cancer is killing my shell of a body

Dragging me down

Pulling apart my body limb from limb

Draining me

Tearing apart what mind I have left

Its almost anamalistic

But when I leave this cruel place known as earth

Remember

I'll be there to watch over you, always

I will guide you 

And alas, love you from afar

I shall be the stars

That watch you while you sleep at night

I shall be the wind

That whispers your name when you're alone

I shall be the tears

That run down your face when you cry

 I shall be your angel

That never leaves your side

My spark is gone

Never forget me, for never shall I leave you.

Author's Note

I'm just looking for some tips to improve, and I'm good with criticism.

Reviews

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This is honest and heartfelt..thank you for sharing your words..
Your words were like remnants of sun on the fading blue of a sky.