Break

Just mmm.

Chest tightens.

Heart beats

faster.

 

Breath,

lost.

 

Happiness drained.

Emotion,

gone.

 

Love,

lost.

 

All that is left,

is a shell

of a person.

 

Humanity,

gone.

 

Love,

lost.

 

Author's Note

I appologise, I have only just started writing again after a year.

Reviews

[Daethli]

you put alot of emotion into those. short yet so very powerful~c:

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Very short little sections but powerful

[Science girl]

Don't apologize, you did well. Wonderful and emotional piece. Glad you posted it for me to read

[_]

Ah! simple yet so powerful yeah after a year you still got the power of the pen. great poem.

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Your profile picture is nice.This is really very good writing. I like whole poem. Keep it up!
Do you read mine too "ANGUISH and SHE"
GOD BLESS YOU!

[James Jason Dye]

The chest is a busted casket. An ethereal hand grasps the rib cage. The affection of his character, a soul with understanding, concerns itself with feeling the disposition of humanity, coal and ice, so a decapitated head, and gallant guts spill out upon the page.

[Krisen Lison]

This is very simple, yet very well done. I see the emotion in every line. A great piece! Keep writing :)