John(1)

It’s over, it’s over| I’m left in the dark| This room is just four walls, a ceiling, and a floor| There is no table or mirror, so there is no way out| I’m blinded by these lies and hidden truths| Yet I can almost feel the reason and way out| You hurt me and yet there is no anger and that leaves me feeling empty| I open my eyes and see the empty landscape of my heart| You grabbed everything like a freakin theif of the night| You were my confidence| Yet the lack of confidence in me was a stab in the back| Emptiness and no color leaves me forever in a bland mood| An out of body experience| Alien to this new emotion I feel| Does this mean anything to you| Pieces of my heart laying everywhere| Yet where is the picture for this puzzle| Can you hear me or are you just deaf| I try this new approach but the blankness of your face disgusts me| Could it be you are not who I thought you were| ?

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

Yes, been there... not a great feeling and it takes time to let go and to realise why things went down hill ...
- - - An out of body experience - - -
That's exactly how it feels at first.
Touching piece. Well written.

PS: I'd put it line after line, I think it would have even more effect.

[Kayla Gentry ( Kyrie Ke..]

Very good poem Emily (See I figured it out right quick lol). There was a lot of passion and emotion in this that you dont normally see in many poems now a days. It's very well written and I like it a lot ♥