My Reality

I sit back and contemplate this reality that I live in trying to imagine some other dimension where I'd make a different decision than the ones on the daily which I'm permitting. I question this world in every sense trying to make sense why everybody try's to give me their two cents and I sense that it might be a sense of power that they feel.

Reviews

[spunthestars]

Is the repeated use of "sense" deliberate?

[Battistoni]

I wrote it that way because I liked the way it sounded. I honestly don't know what I'm doing when it comes to writing. One day I just picked up a pen and a pad and tried to convey my feelings through an artistic fashion. I would love all the criticism I can get because I found to truly love writing. Thank you!