Love? Lies!

Love? Lies!

A Poem by Lauren_The_Awesome

The heartbreak is back
Coming back to torture me
To ruin my life
To ruin plans
To reassure that I did mess up somewhere
To tell me that love is just a fairy tale
Love can't just happen so quickly and then go
Love gives you something to hold onto
But there's a consequence
A consequence that will haunt you in the remains of the 'love'
The word that he tells you everyday
And says he means it
And I try to reciprocate as much as I can
But my attempts failed
I thought he was the one
As I did many others
But I felt something with him
I told him all my secrets
Everything
I poured my heart out
To just find out it was all a lie
A big fat lie
A lie that made me die inside
To find out all the time we spent
Was for nothing
I guess love is just for fairy tales
Since love never stays for long

© 2016 Lauren_The_Awesome


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Heart breaks just make a puzzle even bigger, they scatter the pieces that were many into more. Pick em up, throw them around, shake them, toss em in the sky, feeling more than alive... then... piece them back together, carefully, but always remember, to finish.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the nice review.



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Love is nothing more than a chemical in the brain that compels mammals to breed. That is why science is better. It will never break your heart. There is also anime which is great too. I know the feeling though and that is why I have learned from my mistakes and stuck with anime and science.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

8 Years Ago

Aw :) thank you for the review :)
Wølfy

8 Years Ago

No problem sis. :)
Love the way this is written
Ominous words i relate to being smitten
Vocalizing the pain of being bitten
Everything you've written leaves me reminiscent

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the nice review :)
it's painful. I'm not gonna say I know where you're coming from, that would sound like I'm disregarding your pain or some s**t. but I do understand pain, and feeling betrayed and lied to. being hurt so much that you feel as if you've been stabbed but can't find the knife and have no blood as evidence to turn to. when love seems to be used as a weapon, you might as well be dead, or so it can feel.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

8 Years Ago

Yes. It's the most painful thing to go through. Thanks for the review :) much is appreciated
PoeticSorcery

8 Years Ago

you're welcome :)

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Added on October 21, 2016
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I'm an upcoming writer that hopes one day to succeed. I write mostly poems about my past and the present. My inspiration comes from experience in my life and certain music that makes my mind go into a.. more..

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