Why?

I see you walk past me
With a grin on your face
You speak to me with kindness
With hope there might be an us
But every time I have feelings for another
I somehow mess up and end up nowhere
In a land full of hurt
To think I may one day be with you
My hope and wishes may be crumbled
Unless you see me the way I see you
Can't life just give me a chance to be with someone
Someone that will love and care for me
All I ask for is forgiveness from the past
And let me have someone that would hold my hand
And appreciate me for who I am
Other than how I look

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Can't life just give me a chance to be with someone
Someone that will love and care for me
All I ask for is forgiveness from the past
And let me have someone that would hold my hand
And appreciate me for who I am
Other than how I look"
So potent lines! It is, I think everyone's wish to be with someone who loves them for what they really are and not how they look. This is a seriously good piece of work!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you so much for the nice review :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! It was a pleasure ☺

[Lord of mad men]

wow! this is one of the most moving thing i have ever read. you did a wonderful job. wow you spoke though your heart and it hit mine. i know were your coming from as does the girl i love. it is a rare and wonderful thing to fall for someone so like you and can undfersand your pain. not just feel sorry for you. i hope you fine someone thats is like you to love and be loved by. never give up hope. you my find them or they my find you. someone who love you understands you and you understand them they are your freind and you love.yours truely a mad lord

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you so much for the kind words :) :)

[Johnny]

yes the infamous 'why?' the question most popularly asked usually by those feeling most unpopular either to one specific or many.. hopefully things will turn up for you Lauren.. great piece!!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thanks :) :)

[Gee]

So many never get past the looks and the real person stands not a chance. Your Prince will come someday, you might have to sing a few more frogs first. Love the name, enjoyed the write

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Ohh, so it seems you're in search of love isn't it? lol don't worry God always listens of true loving hearts :)
Bless you!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :) :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome :)

[M.H. Bones]

There is much emotion in these words. I wish you the best of luck in your endeavors to find someone who appreciates you.

Well written and flows decently well. The final line is exceptionally powerful.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you very much :)

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

I can so relate to to this. It's hard to find someone to appreciate everything that you are. It takes a lot of trial and error looking for the right one but that's what being young is for. I enjoyed your poem.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you very much for the review :)

[Unforgiven Guy]

It's really, really hard to find that one special person, no matter who you are. Just stay positive.
Nice writing.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :)