Obstacles

Life has many obstacles
Many things to run into
But the light of another will help
Help you get to the place
The place where you will succeed
The future is ahead
However it needs someone to guide it
To let it know what outcomes it should make
Future needs you to be there to make the impossible possible
To prove people wrong
The people that told you you won't be important
That you would fail
Give those people up
They are your obstacles
The ones that hope you will fail like themselves
What they don't understand is that your stronger
Better than they will ever be
The people that love you the most will flash a light on the possible
Let you know that you are not alone

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

It all starts with how we take life, our attitude is important in this battle with all those obstacles... Negative people brings with them negative thoughts which in turn causes us to be negative and that we are not good enough and that we will fail like them... The ending of your poem leaves a perfect message, we need to hold them closely who love us and inspire us to win these battles... Excellent work mate...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you very much for the review! :)

[Swati Nayak]

Future needs you to be there to make the impossible possible
To prove people wrong

very inspiring

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :)

[Levi Levin]

Your poem has so much truth in it indeed. Lots of truth! Great job!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you for the kind review :)

[Karmee]

I really love the opening lines the best,
Very well written write. I enjoyed this one.
Awesome, full of feeling.
Love the closing line.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :) :) :)

[Distant Reality]

I like your message, It's very true in these fast times. Especially in Florida where the system is meant for you to fail.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Yeah, thank you for the review :)

[Asante]

This is a piece that could inspire people from all different walks of life. It even gave me the morning inspiration I needed. :) Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing it, Lauren.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Aw thank you and your welcome :)

[The Nude Writer]

Yes! Remove all obstacles! All they do is slow you down!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Yep! Obstacles of the world need to be put down. Thanks for the review!