Tragic Love

Tragic Love

A Poem by Lauren_The_Awesome

The major flaw in the world is love

When you say you have a love, do you really?

Think about it

Love can mean many things

If you are dating a person and say oh I'm in love

Are you serious?

This isn't a fairy tale

Meaning two or five months later depending how good the relationship is it will end

One way or another

 The world isn't perfect

It has many flaws that people try to fix

Broken things

Things that may not be able to fix

God has his plans for you but you have to fulfill the legacy he left you

Not dawdle in the heart break of someone

It may feel wonderful to feel loved

But the ending is the painful occurrence of realizing you got fooled

Don't blame yourself for that though

There are much more important things in life

Things that will rise you higher than how you have been in your life

You have the power to bring yourself back up

© 2016 Lauren_The_Awesome


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This is so truthful, Awesome write here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
not all love is forever but some is it is the rares thing one could wish for is to love and beloved forever.love is not in the mind alone it must burn in the souls that are intwined together for it to last a life timje and maybe even the next.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lauren_The_Awesome

8 Years Ago

Yes that is so true. Thanks for the review :)
You have the power to bring yourself back up that's true. When you're in love just feel it but if you've broken your heart in love simply never regret it. That's how your attitude has to be.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lauren_The_Awesome

8 Years Ago

Yeah, thank you for the review :)
Writer at last! Sky ~

8 Years Ago

Your most welcome!

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Added on July 8, 2015
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I'm an upcoming writer that hopes one day to succeed. I write mostly poems about my past and the present. My inspiration comes from experience in my life and certain music that makes my mind go into a.. more..

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