Cold As Ice

I would of let you go if I could

Your love possessed me like a poison

Why do you have to look so beautiful

With the eyes of an angel but a heart of a devil

My heart got shattered many times

But I didn't care

I let you take me away

With your graceful walk

You got me fooled with those smart words

Saying what I wanted to hear

You seemed like you were the real thing

So nice and lovable

But I must have been second guessing myself

Because your heart was as cold as ice

So much meanness inside of the mind of yours

I wish I had seen it the first time

But my eyes were covered over the blanket of love

Love was the shameful thing that kept me with you

My eyes finally opened up and came to my senses

Your love made me feel real but had an artificial feeling

 

Reviews

[Karmee]

I have known people like this,
I can feel this write, it's a sincere write.
Know the feelings involved with this.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you for the kind words :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Maintaining love is hard work. We need assurance that the love is true.
"But my eyes were covered over the blanket of love
Love was the shameful thing that kept me with you
My eyes finally opened up and came to my senses
Your love made me feel real but had an artificial feeling"
When the blanket of love is covering us. We should be content. I believe us humans always want more and this is sad. We learn the good we knew, too late. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you very much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Peach]

I like the honesty and emotions you poured out in this poem.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you.