The Past is the Past

Your beautiful eyes struck me cold
All so dazzling but oh so cold
Your touch made me shiver like a ghost passed
Can't stop looking
Can't stop thinking
An evil is in you
I can sense it
But I can't stand it that I want you so
Knowing the love you will give is pure wickedness
With every move planned for another
The beauty of our 'love' made me blind
Of the reality
Of the people I actually should of payed attention to
Instead I was your puppet in your game
The game of heartbreak and madness
After looking into the relationship deeper
You shown me that I was weak at the time
You being my first
Except I am now strong
I can lead myself into the wilderness of people to love
I realize I shouldn't be afraid to love again
To not shun a good person so I wouldn't get hurt
The trust that I had before you came back to me
You broke me down to a weak girl that was drowning
Drowning in the past
Now I'm stronger than ever ready to conquer

Reviews

[Jane Woolf]

Wow! That's really good! It's very powerfully worded and created a beautiful, lasting impression on me. It sounds so lyrical and poetic (obviously), as if it belongs in a song. All in all, I love it!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

wow thank you! I haven't even finished it yet but thanks!

[Jane Woolf]

Aha no problem!