I & YOU

Yes I love you..

To be with you is like an adorable dream

To be away worths more than a nightmare..

All my life with it's moments big and small,

You're the only one with whom I want to share.....

Contentment is brought with unaware reasons

Smiles are stolen with fragmented thoughts

Just the moments 'I&U' are precious

Everything else's felt rubbish n rot....

Think about you at the dreadful night

Cherish you hard in a sweating day

I just wish silently to sit beside you

And let my eyes only to express and say..

Deep love will rise and fall again n again

Showing those dreams I wanna live with you

Includin those moments of gettin wet in rain

And constantly whispering  'I'm in love with you'..

I'm not afraid even its a 'no' from you

coz I loved with pure heart and mind..

I just want you to witness it truly

You'll surely fall coz mine is hard to find....

Written By - Basu Gupta

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

mind that n!
sweet romantic poem!!!
i liked it!
:)

[Basu Gupta]

Thanks for reading

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Angad Waraich]

Passionate and beautiful.
A little tweaks and editing could take it to a whole new level.

Well done.
Thank you for sharing.
-Angad

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You..

[Bec]

Beautiful. Full of passion

Need comments from people on my poems please everyone

[Naina]

very beautifully written.... It is written from the heart and this only makes it special.... "I just wish silently to sit beside you, And let my eyes only to express and say", I really like these lines, they are expressing your true love...
keep writing..:)

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You..

[Somenath Nag]

Can't but appreciate your effort..... What I like most about this poem is its simplicity and lucidity of the language....."I'm not afraid even its a 'no' from you" is really striking.... In fact most of the guys become "afraid" at the thought of receiving a "no".... However, this poem is really inspirational.... I liked it..

[Basu Gupta]

..Thank You

[Adrimira]

Such profound love, very beautiful.

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You..glad you liked it

[Sophy Freebirds]

The whole piece is written from heart,thats what i appreciate.Even though the rhyme is forced." Admittibg you are in love without any fear of the response is rarely found" .I respect your guts boy.★wishes for your lovelife★

~Sophy

[Basu Gupta]

Loved those stars..Thanks for reading Sophy

[Sophy Freebirds]

Was a pleasure

[Sophy Freebirds]

Was a pleasure

[Life Pal]

u r welcome...........................:)

[Life Pal]

Ya love should be like that, yes or no, still strong to love, true love.
Nice written :)

[Basu Gupta]

Thanks for reviewing..

[Baby Ricochet]

Kinda reminds me of an old school pop song