I & YOU

Yes I love you..

To be with you is like an adorable dream

To be away worths more than a nightmare..

All my life with it's moments big and small,

You're the only one with whom I want to share.....

Contentment is brought with unaware reasons

Smiles are stolen with fragmented thoughts

Just the moments 'I&U' are precious

Everything else's felt rubbish n rot....

Think about you at the dreadful night

Cherish you hard in a sweating day

I just wish silently to sit beside you

And let my eyes only to express and say..

Deep love will rise and fall again n again

Showing those dreams I wanna live with you

Includin those moments of gettin wet in rain

And constantly whispering  'I'm in love with you'..

I'm not afraid even its a 'no' from you

coz I loved with pure heart and mind..

I just want you to witness it truly

You'll surely fall coz mine is hard to find....

Written By - Basu Gupta

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

This is coming from the heart of a giver, so purely resonating. Nicely done.

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You..

[Shivam Murari]

Welcome. :)

[Ruth]

Such love is rare and a treasure...deep emotion here, beautifully conveyed :)

[Basu Gupta]

thank you for giving time.

[lord]

it reflects true love and i am just amazed by realizing the feelings that have risen you to such state....
may i be also touched by this and let me reach my beloved till i am dead

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You for reading n reviewing.

[Valentine]

When we meet certain people, the heart can jump and that special feeling comes. If we do not act on it, we lose the chance .. Valentine

[Basu Gupta]

Agreed..n' Thank You for reading

[Laura Lynn]

pretty in love expression! there is little I want more this day than to try to put a combination of words together like this, written from one's feelings of desire, the way here the contrast between ordinary frames of time and memories of moments with the beloved,

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You..that was a nice review..I appreciate
thanks for visiting..

[Calibaster]

I can say that I've felt kinda like this before, you captured that feeling very well. :) Great job!

[Basu Gupta]

Here too..thanks for reading n' reviewing my work..

[Calibaster]

Anytime! ;)

[Bec]

Very romantic. I really like the line 'Deep love will rise and fall again.'

[Basu Gupta]

Thanks for visiting

[armin]

Awwww, really sweat. I felt every part of your poem. Especially the last one ,it was a great punch. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.
Have a nice time.

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You for reading

[Shriya]

wonderfully written very romantic and emotional. was swayed off with emotions :)

[Basu Gupta]

Thank you for visiting

[Shriya]

most welcome

[All I See Is Blood and ..]

Very sweet. Thanks for sharing