CAN'T YOU BE MINE

English Song..damn special for me.. For "Her"..Whom I'm gonna remember thr most..

Title - "Can't You be Mine"

My dreams are of you

Which forced me to do

Thorns are saved for me 

But petals for you..

Can I be your shadow

Always walking beside

Can I be your heartbeat

Of your heart inside..

Cant u be mine..

Mere khwaabo me tu harr pal zinda hai..

Cant u be mine

Har lamha bas tu saansein leta hai..

I cant breathe alone

Coz, my breath is counting on you..

I cant sleep alone

Coz m thinkin about you night till dawn..

But now

I feel

The moments 

are just some memories..

But now 

I can see

You're leaving

Just like a shadow in the dark..

But I'm holding you girl

N I'm holdin you tight

No matter you ain't there 

Still kept close to my heart..

Yes I'll be your shadow

Always walking beside

Yes I'll be your heartbeat

of your heart inside..

Yes you'l be mine..

Mere khwaabo me tu harr pal zinda hai..

Yes you'll be mine

Har lamha bas tu saansein leta hai..

Yes you'l be mine.

Me dekhoon toh bas tera chehra hai..

Yes you'l be mine

Binn tere mera dil adhoora hai..

Thank You for readin..By Basu Gupta

Reviews

[lord]

i think that you are just wasting your skill... love and verse are written by you for the one who is mortal...
uniquely u have the power of verse to arouse your true love(GOD THE CREATOR)... DIVE INTO ITS RHYTHM AND FEEL AS ONE with him...become like MEERA and experience true bliss and depart to your true abode....BECAUSE WHETHER U ACCEPT OR NOT THIS IS YOUR FLOW AND YOUR JOURNEY AS YOU ARE SOUL...

[Valentine]

A very warm write, wish I knew the foreign words. Valentine

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You for reviewing

[Miss Sharon]

A beautifully romantic though bittersweet write. I think this would make a good song . ~Sharon

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You for your feedback Mam

[Miss Sharon]

You are very welcome! ~Sharon

[Leslie Ann]

Can I be your shadow

Always walking beside

Can I be your heartbeat

Of your heart inside.. Very nice thoughts.. True love does this to me... =) Thank you

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You..

[Calibaster]

You really like romance, huh? :) (who doesn't?) Well done, you captured that emotion well. :)

[Basu Gupta]

Thanks for visiting..glad you liked it..

[Calibaster]

You're welcome. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I loved reading this poem, it has such a good rythmn to it. Very creative with the English hindi combination.

Kaze~

[Basu Gupta]

Thanks for reading..

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Luna Zerimar]

Loved, loved, loved!

It's so romantic. I would honestly faint if I received a love letter similar to this.

I'm sort of confused though. You managed to put in another language.

Do you mind translating those lines to me?

You're writing has this great flow, and the stanzas are well put together.

I also loved how you compared yourself to thorns, and compared the girl to petals.

Makes it even sweeter.

Great write Basu. (:

[Basu Gupta]

 Mer khwaabo me tu harr pal zinda hai..- You are alive in my dreams

Cant u be mine
read more Mer khwaabo me tu harr pal zinda hai..- You are alive in my dreams

Cant u be mine

Har lamha bas tu saansein leta hai.. - Every second you only breathe in me n' my dreams

Me dekhoon toh bas tera chehra hai - I see your face only//Day dream about your face only

Binn tere mera dil adhoora hai - Without you my heart is lonely n' incomplete..


thanks Jess for reading..

[All I See Is Blood and ..]

It sounds like something that you would give to someone you are madly in love with.
Thanks for sharing

[Basu Gupta]

Thanks for reading

[Qavah Simchah]

Good rythmn! I like it. Would make a beautiful song. My favorite lines are: Yes I'll be your shadow / Always walking beside / Yes I'll be your heartbeat / of your heart inside. Very romantic

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You..

[Shubhangi]

nice one..liked the english hindi combination...very new!!...liked it much.

[Basu Gupta]

Thanks Shubhangi