Words Unsaid

Jab bhi tumhe dekha
Bas ek he khayaal aaya
Kyun ho dil ke itne paas
Kyun ho mere liye itne khaas....

Jab bhi tumhe jaana
Bas ek he sawaal aaya
Kya hoon me tumhare thode bhi kaabil
Kya kar sakta hoon tumhe me kabhi bhi haasil..

Jab bhi ki apni aankhe band
Bas tumhara he chehra saamne aaya
Dekha bas haste muskuraate tumhe
Maanga bas humesha tumhara he saaya..

Jab bhi tumhe paaya
Bas khud pe khumaar aaya
Kaash humesha ke liye rukk jaaye yeh pal
Kaash na badle mera aaj na mera kal..



Yeh sab nhi dikhaata mera poora pyaar
Bas ek choti si koshish hai
Dil ke liye toh ek maamuli sach hai
Jisko poora karne ke liye shayad shabdo ki kami hai....

Written By - BASU GUPTA

Reviews

[Arsh]

Lol.. you're seemed like a romantic one. Well, sometimes, the words're not meant to be said to anyone. They're themselves heard by special someone. And, when the someone's not seemed to be heard, then there's something wrong cause, most of the time, the love's itself not defined .. not even confined to heart. Quiet deep imagery you've plotted around the page!

[Basu Gupta]

Thanks for reading..

[Arsh]

It 'was' my pleasure.

[Sophy Freebirds]

A very emotional write.. we listen to the tunes of sweet music and words emerge in our thoughts which are deeply buried inside :) yep you have given the apt title- the best of the feeling remain unspoken.. touchy piece Basu...Nice write.i would love to hear it as a song done.

~Sophy

[Basu Gupta]

Your wish my command madam..

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=pnVNQ_q_dNE
here's the recording for such

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yeppee.. :) will check it out.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yeppee.. :) will check it out.

[Basu Gupta]

Hope you'll like it

[Ayushi]

Nice poem..full of emotions.
I can understand that it must have been really hard to write something like this and find the appropriate words.

[Basu Gupta]

Naah..not really..I was just playing my guitar n'whole of this sequence came unknowingly..
glad you liked it..thanks for visiting

[Patricia]

well I tried to translate it but it won't translate. sorry I tried though. :(

[Basu Gupta]

No problems..you know hindi?

[Patricia]

No I don't but I do have a translator program and it wouldn't translate. Which is strange cuz it always has before. I will have to check that out later.

[Bowers]

.... I bet this is a great write ;) I just dont understand it... at all ;)

[Basu Gupta]

Glad it made you say that..
btw it is close to my heart coz, it's my first hindi poem..
I'll try to translate it in english so that you can understand it..n thanks for stopping by

[Bowers]

:) your welcome, that would be cool :)

[Saddam]

jitna ache se prawah bana tha lekin ant aate aate flow mein kami aa gayi. kavita to romantic hai aur dil ko lagta hai, bas prawah ki kami rah gayi.
Behtar hoga koi indian group jo is samay Mr penny ka hai use join kar le aur hindi ko wahi post kare. acha responce hoga.
Over all poetry is very nice.