With 'YOU'....

Fingers crossed..!!

With you I enjoy my suffocating mediocrity,
With you I love me and my impulsive stupidity..
With you I can resist those evil temptations,
With you I fail to reciprocate other's attention..

Maybe I'd be the one in an endless queue,
All of us waiting and wanting you
Some can even give you another heart,
Some can fly you through those beautiful stars....

I don't think I do afford that all
But I'm sure I'll always catch you fall
I even won't make you fly through stars
I fear if moon just keep you as one of his star..

Changes would be enormous when you'd be with me
Starting with the one I badly want you to see,
Right now my destiny is monitoring my life
With you I can write by my own with full rights..

Every page of that book will start with you
Ending with the line I'm still in love with you..
Middle part would be the things we have done,
Accompanying with carefree and frivolous fun..

So would you be mine in this life so small
So that I can enjoy even with it's challenging falls
I won't ever lie and make you cry
Please say 'yes' and atleast give me a try..

Written By - BASU GUPTA

Author's Note

everyone feels for their first crush,first love..they do not know why they feel special with them,why their tease and taunts are felt appreciation..and why their heart-beat increases even when they see their beloved initials somewhere....
Maybe this is called 'LoVe'..
I tried to figure and pen down some of the things for such..
Hope you all like it..

Reviews

[Aaron the Baron]

This is really great. I think it really grabs the desire to love and to be loved. And yet it's very humble, not "promising the stars" and what not. I like that a lot.

[Basu Gupta]

Thank You..

[Tom]

Eloquent, you have captured many of those little things that we all feel or have felt when cupid's arrow strikes !

A delightfully sweet love poem, top job Basu !

[Basu Gupta]

thankya Tom..
Thanks for stopping by..

[Chris]

I was reminded of Valentine's Day wishes and hopes... Romantic dreams. Deep blushes and innocence.

[Basu Gupta]

thank you chris..

[MOON]

Beautifully expressed sentiments.

[Basu Gupta]

thank you very much..

[bobc]

B...I get a clear sense that English is not your first language. i find the feeling in this poem...in all your work actually...so genuine and heartfelt. However, sometimes the grammar is a little off and the syntax you've chosen feels very awkward. Perhaps we can talk about this via WC's mail facility...if you liked. ...bobc