With 'YOU'....

Fingers crossed..!!

With you I enjoy my suffocating mediocrity,
With you I love me and my impulsive stupidity..
With you I can resist those evil temptations,
With you I fail to reciprocate other's attention..

Maybe I'd be the one in an endless queue,
All of us waiting and wanting you
Some can even give you another heart,
Some can fly you through those beautiful stars....

I don't think I do afford that all
But I'm sure I'll always catch you fall
I even won't make you fly through stars
I fear if moon just keep you as one of his star..

Changes would be enormous when you'd be with me
Starting with the one I badly want you to see,
Right now my destiny is monitoring my life
With you I can write by my own with full rights..

Every page of that book will start with you
Ending with the line I'm still in love with you..
Middle part would be the things we have done,
Accompanying with carefree and frivolous fun..

So would you be mine in this life so small
So that I can enjoy even with it's challenging falls
I won't ever lie and make you cry
Please say 'yes' and atleast give me a try..

Written By - BASU GUPTA

Author's Note

everyone feels for their first crush,first love..they do not know why they feel special with them,why their tease and taunts are felt appreciation..and why their heart-beat increases even when they see their beloved initials somewhere....
Maybe this is called 'LoVe'..
I tried to figure and pen down some of the things for such..
Hope you all like it..

Reviews

[sivan]

such a heartfelt poem a plea for a chance to love like these lines "Every page of that book will start with you
Ending with the line I'm still in love with you..

[Gaurav Walia]

Indeed, this is called 'LOVE'. A feeling of being loved is out-of-this-world. You may fall and pull yourself back on your feet but when there is a hand you can hold onto, is something extraordinary. It's a very well-expressed piece you've shared with us. Thank You.. KUDOS!

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and this is a poem that sighs were made for.
Absolutely beautiful!
:) Julie

[Gaurav]

Beautiful :')
Simply Beautiful.....Loved it.......

[yliana]

This is really good, really thought out and relatable

[larryb]

Well written Basu..heartfelt and to the point..I liked this very much...Thank you for sharing this with us :)

[Talkless]

These poem remind me of that unfailing first love moment...well penned my friend.*applauding*

[wordman]

a beautifull love poem an expression of love for ne you love but no need to feel un worthy o hr

[Leslie Philibert]

What impresses here is the honesty and clarity of your voice..

[Vani Jalagar]

wow!!! very cute n better way of proposing ..this perfectly suites my first crush :)