With 'YOU'....

Fingers crossed..!!

With you I enjoy my suffocating mediocrity,
With you I love me and my impulsive stupidity..
With you I can resist those evil temptations,
With you I fail to reciprocate other's attention..

Maybe I'd be the one in an endless queue,
All of us waiting and wanting you
Some can even give you another heart,
Some can fly you through those beautiful stars....

I don't think I do afford that all
But I'm sure I'll always catch you fall
I even won't make you fly through stars
I fear if moon just keep you as one of his star..

Changes would be enormous when you'd be with me
Starting with the one I badly want you to see,
Right now my destiny is monitoring my life
With you I can write by my own with full rights..

Every page of that book will start with you
Ending with the line I'm still in love with you..
Middle part would be the things we have done,
Accompanying with carefree and frivolous fun..

So would you be mine in this life so small
So that I can enjoy even with it's challenging falls
I won't ever lie and make you cry
Please say 'yes' and atleast give me a try..

Written By - BASU GUPTA

Author's Note

everyone feels for their first crush,first love..they do not know why they feel special with them,why their tease and taunts are felt appreciation..and why their heart-beat increases even when they see their beloved initials somewhere....
Maybe this is called 'LoVe'..
I tried to figure and pen down some of the things for such..
Hope you all like it..

Reviews

[Gedalya]

This is tinged with 'young love'.
When love is new, it is always a time to be a fool. Love is a foolish thing, but it is equally one of the most rewarding. This reminds me of my own stupidity in years gone past, and I have to tell you, those were some good times.

[Basu Gupta]

yeah gedalya...
glad you liked itttt...
thanks a lottttttttttt bro

[Talesha]

"Every page of that book will start with you
Ending with the line I'm still in love with you.. " I love this poem so much.It reflects sincerity and honesty..and how real love can be,if given the chance.Very powerful poem.Thank you for sharing.:)

[Basu Gupta]

thanks a lot talesha..glad you liked it

[Sylvia Chika]

Lovely!

[Basu Gupta]

Thanks Sylvia

[Ankita]

Flattering, romantic, sweet and nicely written. I enjoyed reading this piece and liked the first stanza the most. Good work. Keep writing. :)

[Basu Gupta]

thanks ankita..glad you liked it

[Hannavas R.]

This sounds like a proposal, and it was good enough to make me blush. I really enjoyed it thank you for writing something so innocent and pure.

[Basu Gupta]

hehe..i never thought you'll blush while going through it..
Thanks a lott for your review

[costa siwale]

Awesome piece, I like the way you put it together well done ..

[Basu Gupta]

thankya bro..

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! Adorable peom!! Really sweet! :)

[Basu Gupta]

thanks krista

[Ency Bearis]

A touching poem and well presented

[Basu Gupta]

thanks....

[Clara]

I thought you explored infatuation wonderfully.
There was also a sense of innocence and naivety - the way we all feel in love... that our love is special, different from the rest and that love, overcomes all.

A lovely write, Basu.

[Kaylee Olson]

wow this brought tears to my eyes.. this is true love